> Well, I fail to see a distinct "Worship" theme in there, but this is a matter of
> interpretation I guess.
> Technically, there is very little to complain about. A few things that come to
> mind:

> 1) While the overall colouring of the sky fits well, the clouds seem a bit fake
> somehow - perhaps they need more detail.

Will do.

>
> 2) The mountains in the background look too much like plain "gaussian bells", I
> think some jaggedness a la the foreground rocks would make them more convincing.

Done.

>
> 3) As others have said, the shape of the Guardian is difficult to make out,
> either it or the bridge should be a somewhat different colour. Also, to one who
> has played way too much Starcraft, it looks distinctly Protoss :)

Not necessarily a bad thing.  As someone mentioned, it looks like it is camouflaged.

> Oh by the way, that chasm doesn't look so wide; I'd just forget about the
> Guardian and pole vault to Paradise... Unless both bridge and Guardian are
> supposed to be huge; but they don't look that way.

I'll stick some defense cannons on the other side.  To discourage pole vaulters. :)

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